"michael (VO)
Theres gone almost 5 years now... You know, and I've learned something. Its all a big lie, time don't heal a shit! I'm gonna live my hole life without my baby brother. My wounds never healed, they only got deeper. I just don't know how to describe how much it hurts, knowing that every single day, im gonna wake up without him. There is only one thing that keeps me alive, its knowing that someday, some beautiful day, when I'm done here, ill see hes face agian."
Hi, i was just wondering if this is a good start of a screen?
Also.. were can i finde some good tricks to screenplaying, like (VO) means voice over. And if i want a titel to come in after this, then its what?
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